My first concert

Justin Bieber Concert

Last night I went to a Justin Bieber concert with my cousin and aunty at the Vector Arena the opening act for his concert was Cody Simpson the concert started at 6:30 p.m and ended at 11:30 p.m while we sat down all of Justin's fans stood up and screamed he sang all of his songs and every time he sang or talked the girls screamed. While I sat there a lot of girls were getting in my way and I couldn't see so I stood up and watched while my cousin sat down I had so much fun.

When it was close to the end they play a video with a guy and he said " wake up"! He was saying that we shouldn't be recording the concert and be watching it over and over again but to watch and keep this as a memory and then he said if you want Justin to come out yell his name and all the girls were yelling Justin over and over again until he came out when he came out he had no shirt on and all the girls screamed. When he sang the last song a young woman threw her bra on stage and at the end of the son one of the dancers picked the bra up and threw it on the ground and Justin Bieber said "bye New Zealand" and stopped at the back and went down the elevator to the bottom stage.

My Writing Sample

Whispers

Today was our first day moving to our new house everyone was excited but me, I didn’t want to move houses and start a new school I wanted to stay where we were. So on the way I was trying to make up excuses so we can go back to our old house but it never worked. I was moaning what “if the house is haunted, what if we never knew that the house was built over a cemetery, what if something bad happened there, what if that house used to be a witches house”. But no one listened when we got there the house looked like an old mansion.

We went inside to have a look at the house and saw a lot of creepy old things like a dusty piano, a dark closet and a dirty chandelier my mum said we can just clean this baby and hang it up. I went upstairs to see what was up there and to see the rooms as I was walking down the dark hallway, I heard a whisper I said stop playing around guys I know it’s you and then I heard the whisper in my ear it sounded like someone saying “help”, then I ran down stairs scared, everyone looked at me like what was going on and then they said “what happened” and I said “ it’s nothing”. After we picked our rooms we had our showers and dressed in our pjs after that we went downstairs to eat. My room was at the end of the hallway next to my mum and dad. After dinner we went upstairs and went to sleep. I woke up that night to go toilet and heard the whisper again and again, I looked in the mirror and saw someone behind me, I was so scared I turned around and saw nothing there. so I washed my hands and went to bed. While I was trying to go to sleep I heard running up and down the stairs and the hallway I looked out of my door and saw no one so I hopped in bed and heard the sounds again.

My first days at school

As I walk into the gate of Manurewa South School I was so excited I was starting my first school. My class was Room six everyone was really kind to me. I went inside and saw that there was a lot of people smiling and I felt really welcome. I went and sat on the mat and people started talking to me because we had Oral Language. My first friends were Toa and Emma they were my best friends I had some teachers as a friends too.  My favourite teacher was the teacher who handed out the rolls. Because she was really nice to me.

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As I woke up I opened the window I could hear birds singing outside that put me in a good mood to start my first day at school. I didn’t have any uniform to put so I had to wear my normal clothes. On the the table there was a bottle of milk a box of cereal, some toasts, a tub of butter and a jar of jam. I remember I had only cereal and milk because I was so excited to go to school on that day.

I hopped in the car and put my seatbelt on. As I was looking through car window I could see school kids walking to school with their parents. As we were getting close to school I could see some teachers and cars were stopping and dropping off school kids at the gate. I hopped out of the car with my mum and dad. As I walked into the gate of Manurewa South School, I was so excited that I was starting my first day at school. My mum and dad took me to the school office to see what class I was in.

My class was Room six to my surprise everyone was really nice to me. I went inside the classroom and saw that there were a lot of pupils smiling at me and I felt really welcomed. I went and sat on the mat and pupils started talking to me because we had been given time by the teacher to tell stories. After we told stories we went outside and had something to eat and went to play.

My first friends were Toa and Emma they were my best friends, I also had a teacher who became my friend too.  My favourite teacher who handed out the rolls to me to take it to class was Mrs Gallagher. She was my favourite teacher and my friend.

My Mihi Mihi

Kia ora koutou
Greetings to you all

Kua hui mai nei
who gathered here

Ki tenei wahi
To this place

Ki te kawe mai
To bring

I te aroha
The love

Ka nui te hari
Great is the joy

Mo to koutou manawanui
for your dedication

Ki te huihui mai
In assembling/ gathering

Ki te ako
to learn

I nga kaupapa
the topics

E pa ana ki tenei wananga
concerning this school of learning