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Wednesday 30 October 2013

Malala Nominated For Nobel Prize

Kiwi Kids News
Read the whole article and record the key words or phrases that answer the following questions.



News Article Headline
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WHO?
Malala Yousafzai
WHAT?
She has been nominated for the nobel peace prize
WHERE?
She is from pakistan but living in england at the moment
WHEN?
We will see in october if she has won
WHY?
Because she was fighting for education for girls in Pakistan
HOW?

                                                                                                                                            
Rewrite the article in your own words

Headline:
Malala Nominated For Nobel Peace Prize
Summary:
Malala Yousafzai has been nominated for a nobel prize, for fighting for girls education in Pakistan. Even though she got shot by the Taliban for speaking out about girls education she still has been fighting for equal rights. At the moment she is in England because her is in danger and because she is waiting for an operation. The winners are announced at the end of October.



Opinion and Why:
What do you think about this news and why



Questions
What are some questions this article has prompted that you may like to find out the answers to
I would like to know more about Pakistan education.
I would like to know more about Malala’s education
I would like to know more about Malala.







                                                   

Wednesday 23 October 2013

My groups storyboard

My group had to do a storyboard for 4 shot movie and this is what we did.

This is My groups storyboard.


Monday 14 October 2013

Paddle pop event

My literacy teacher gave me 40 minutes to do a writing about school or a holiday event and I chose holiday event so this is what I have done.


Yesterday On Sunday My aunty took me and my cousins to the Paddle Pop premiere we went there to watch the new Paddle Pop movie called Paddle Pop Dinoterra. My cousins and I got free drinks, free popcorn and a free dvd. The Paddle Pop lion said he brought some gifts the gifts were 27 tents, 2 Ipods and 5 bags full of paddle pops. I never got a prize but the front rows did all because they had yelled out some numbers and letters and who ever was sitting close or on the seat got the prize, but for the bag full of paddle pops we had to check under our seat and see if we had a envelope under our seat and if we did we would get the prize.

After the movie we went to my aunty’s and watched the dvd, the dvd is called paddle pop begins 2 the movie was 88 minutes I only watched 53 minutes of the movie. After the movie my uncle and aunty came to take me back home.


What I think I did well with my writing

I think I did well with my spelling.
I think I did well with where the location was.
I think I did well with putting my sentences in the right place. 

Goals

I need to work on having a better introduction.
I need to put my punctuation in the right places.
I need to do more detailed information.